[x]

deviantART

 
About Me Member New Artist beogradjanka21/Female/Serbia Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
Needs Premium Membership
Statistics 186 Deviations
1,218 Comments
5,206 Pageviews

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Belgrade, Serbia
  • Interests: lenguages, music, travel....

Gracias por el fuego, Benedetti

Mon May 18, 2009, 12:43 PM
Intimidad

Soñamos juntos
juntos despertamos
el tiempo hace o deshace
mientras tanto

no le importan tu sueño
ni mi sueño
somos torpes
o demasiado cautos

pensamos que no cae
esa gaviota
creemos que es eterno
este conjuro
que la batalla es nuestra
o de ninguno

juntos vivimos
sucumbimos juntos
pero esa destrucción
es una broma
un detalle una ráfaga

un vestigio
y un abrirse y cerrarse
el paraíso

ya nuestra intimidad
es tan inmensa
que la muerte la esconde
en su vacío

quiero que me relates
el duelo que te callas

por mi parte te ofrezco
mi última confianza

  • Mood: Pity
  • Reading: M.Benedetti

deviantART Notice

[x]

Comments


Hvala na fav-u!

--
Human is a being which smiles.
Give me that smile.
gracias por el comentario (:
Thanks for :+fav:ing my newest work "Suspense"


Would be nice that you come back :iconoak-elfglitter: my Gallery !!!
Thanks a lot for the :+favlove:

:blowkiss:

--
:butterflytwo: I'm like a butterfly, pretty to see but hard to catch :butterflytwo:

:butterflytwo: My world [link] :butterflytwo: :flirty:
Thanks to ~hsn2555 for editing my Avatar :hug:
hi sanya! thanks a lot :lol:

--
my name it means nothing, my age it means less... (B.Dylan)
Hey!
thanx very much ;)

--
... discoverer of the last Frontier...
Was my pleasure :love: :kiss: !

--
" To all lost souls,who have forgotten to believe in the IMMENSITY OF LOVE. "

:oops::-X:|:fight::nod::dead::bucktooth::-O:hmm::XD::fear::oops::-X:|:fight::nod::dead::bucktooth::-O:hmm::XD::fear:
Flagged as Spam
what up.
Hey, whats going on? 23/female.. come chat with me on this website CLICK HERE

--
you have been :lick: on the forehead by Grunta
Sitting here waiting to die is not that bad "sometimes"
Thanks a lot for the :+favlove:
:rose:

--
:butterflytwo: I'm like a butterfly, pretty to see but hard to catch :butterflytwo:

:butterflytwo: My world [link] :butterflytwo: :flirty:
Thanks to ~hsn2555 for editing my Avatar :hug:
Hiya :wave:, thank you very much for the :+devwatch: and the :+fav::+fav:! :blowkiss: I appreciate them a lot! :aww:
Thanks a lot for the :+fav: and the :+devwatch:

You´re always welcome :iconoak-elfglitter: my Gallery !!!
Thank you so much for the :+devwatch:.
:hug:
I'm glad you like my work! :wave:

--
"You never can be too thin, too rich, have too many cores, or have too much memory."


FAQ #114: How to increase my page views?

Site Map